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darkmistress
02-03-2006, 12:11 AM
This is a page I've been working on for my cousin's "death metal" band. I only need a few little things that this web page is missing as I'm pretty happy the way it's going. I can't work it out as I've spent so much time working on the main background I can't think of what little finishing touches it needs. I don't want to add any tacky skulls or overused "death" symbols. I'm trying to keep it dramatic and professional not cheesy and cheap.

*Please note it's only an image so the links aren't clickable but every page will look similar to this one.

All constructive criticism is appreciated :wink:

http://astridge.finheaven.com/dessant.html

dolphinfan2k5
02-03-2006, 12:16 AM
Sorry, I can't help you out too much. I don't know about the border though.

Buddwalk
02-03-2006, 12:17 AM
This is a page I've been working on for my cousin's "death metal" band. I only need a few little things that this web page is missing as I'm pretty happy the way it's going. I can't work it out as I've spent so much time working on the main background I can't think of what little finishing touches it needs. I don't want to add any tacky skulls or overused "death" symbols. I'm trying to keep it dramatic and professional not cheesy and cheap.

*Please note it's only an image so the links aren't clickable but every page will look similar to this one.

All constructive criticism is appreciated :wink:

http://astridge.finheaven.com/dessant.html


very very good work dm

feelthepain
02-03-2006, 01:35 AM
Maybe some wrought iron. Like a gate. Add a little more detail around the white border where you have the site map, maybe use some sort of granite effect or marble. Made to look antiqued. Maybe some ivy. Some sunlight rays, like you would see coming through the trees when it's hazy or fogy.

spydertl79
02-06-2006, 03:43 PM
idk, looks good to me