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phins054
06-19-2003, 02:34 PM
I have written a (relatively) short story of how I think EPIII will turn out. It mostly involves Anakins seduction to the dark side. If you are interested in reading it, PM me with an email address you want me to send it to and off it will go.

I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism...I don't mind if you think it sucks, just explain why.

Thanks in advance for anyone that takes the time to read it.

Prime Time
06-19-2003, 03:12 PM
Send it to me....Franco8813@aol.com

phins054
06-19-2003, 05:45 PM
On its way PT...

Iryman
06-19-2003, 06:32 PM
I have a friend that is a huge star wars freak and if you want i can let him read it. And trust me you will get his honest opinion from him. If you want me to have him check it out send it to me at iryman@woh.rr.com

XoPhinsoX
06-19-2003, 07:47 PM
Don't the Clones go to war, then Obi roxxOrs Anakin into the lava or whatever, he makes the suit becames he's a mean bitch when it comes to making stuff, straps the bad boy on and becomes the elite one known as Darth Vader.

I bet it's not far from that ;p.

phins054
06-19-2003, 07:53 PM
Yeah...something like that... ;)

WeVie
06-19-2003, 11:52 PM
Send it my way please wevie13@yahoo.com

Prime Time
06-20-2003, 01:52 AM
Dang 17 pages....better start now so I can finish in time for Christmas :lol: j/p I have read 2 pages so far. And so far so good.

phins054
06-23-2003, 10:27 AM
Wevie...On its way.

Glad you like it so far PT...:D

phins054
06-25-2003, 06:00 PM
Anyone else interested???

WeVie
06-26-2003, 12:25 AM
I still don't have it. When do I get it phins054?

phins054
06-26-2003, 05:45 PM
OK Wevie...on its way again...I have been having issues with some people getting it. If you dont get it...let me know here and I will find another way to get it to you. Its also posted on a site...Here's the link.

http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfiction/apprentice/apprentice00.htm


Let me know what you all think...And thanks for reading it.:evil:

Prime Time
06-26-2003, 07:05 PM
I could foward it but I would need to know who is having problems

WeVie
06-27-2003, 12:35 AM
Sweet I got it this time. Thanks. To tell the truth I think I may have gotten it the first time but I thought it was spam and deleted it. Sorry.

phins054
06-27-2003, 03:02 PM
Glad you got it...PM me or email me and let me know what you think.

Thanks.

phins054
06-30-2003, 11:50 AM
Any thoughts yet?!?