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TheDon74
01-23-2010, 05:05 AM
Thought this might be a fun experiment. It's pretty simple just write the next line in the story (and only one) If you and a friend want to go back and forth (3am crew) and fill in a big block that would be cool.

Edit: If you really have a great idea and it takes two lines who really cares?

Try to act like you wrote the line before you and continue with that thought so the story somewhat stays focused, but funny would be good to. Anyway I'll start it off.

Oh and story titles are welcome as well.


Chapter 1

The Everglades is a miserable god forsaken place to be August, especially when your dumping a body.

Possum
01-23-2010, 05:12 AM
"I hate mosquitoes and tell me why again did we kill this fat guy?" exclaimed cedar.

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 05:19 AM
Cedar looked over his shoulder at Possum and said "Does this guy ever stop bit*hing?"

Possum
01-23-2010, 05:35 AM
All of a sudden the dead fat guy, well he wasn't really dead.

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 05:46 AM
Thats when Ricky who happen to be 34 jumped to his feet and chopped into Cedars throat with the edge of an open hand before galloping into the dark swamp.

Possum
01-23-2010, 05:55 AM
Possum immediately got on his phone and called the cast of CSI: MIAMI.

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 06:04 AM
The cast all refused to take his calls so Possum started firing random shots from his 9mm Desert Eagle into the tree line hoping to get lucky.

Possum
01-23-2010, 06:12 AM
He heard a grown from the woods, ran over, and low and behold it was RDS, a bullet had taken one of his thumbs off.

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 06:25 AM
Cedar was just getting up when he heard the loud pops so he stumbled over to where Possum and RDS were standing.

BARF
01-23-2010, 06:40 AM
and out of the corner of possum's eye he sees a BIG DOG peeing on a tree marking his spot

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 06:49 AM
Just then he noticed the BIG DOG had RDS's thumb in his mouth

Bumpus
01-23-2010, 09:52 AM
(narrator - Morgan Freeman's voice) It seems as if ole' RDS just wouldn't stay down.

Mr_Freezetag
01-23-2010, 10:41 AM
A chase commences, Possum, ravaging through the foggy morning dew after the Holy thumb...

Ricky_Fan34
01-23-2010, 07:08 PM
Possum, being the athletic guy he is, managed to catch the BIG DOG and retrieve RDS's thumb.

TheDon74
01-23-2010, 07:32 PM
He then plunged the bloody stump into Ceders iced coffee just in case it could be reattached.

Bumpus
01-24-2010, 02:30 AM
Meanwhile, BIG DOG began to pout.

CedarPhin
01-28-2010, 02:46 AM
Cedar and Possum took BIG DOG along to track the fat man who escaped