Constructive Criticism Please

[darkmistress]

This is a page I've been working on for my cousin's "death metal" band. I only need a few little things that this web page is missing as I'm pretty happy the way it's going. I can't work it out as I've spent so much time working on the main background I can't think of what little finishing touches it needs. I don't want to add any tacky skulls or overused "death" symbols. I'm trying to keep it dramatic and professional not cheesy and cheap.

*Please note it's only an image so the links aren't clickable but every page will look similar to this one.

All constructive criticism is appreciated :wink:

http://astridge.finheaven.com/dessant.html

[dolphinfan2k5]

Sorry, I can't help you out too much. I don't know about the border though.

[Buddwalk]

This is a page I've been working on for my cousin's "death metal" band. I only need a few little things that this web page is missing as I'm pretty happy the way it's going. I can't work it out as I've spent so much time working on the main background I can't think of what little finishing touches it needs. I don't want to add any tacky skulls or overused "death" symbols. I'm trying to keep it dramatic and professional not cheesy and cheap.

*Please note it's only an image so the links aren't clickable but every page will look similar to this one.

All constructive criticism is appreciated :wink:

http://astridge.finheaven.com/dessant.html


very very good work dm

[feelthepain]

Maybe some wrought iron. Like a gate. Add a little more detail around the white border where you have the site map, maybe use some sort of granite effect or marble. Made to look antiqued. Maybe some ivy. Some sunlight rays, like you would see coming through the trees when it's hazy or fogy.

[spydertl79]

idk, looks good to me